From d66259d4ddf0420af84cd03da13cda55334aa6ad Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jeffrey Yasskin <jyasskin@google.com>
Date: Wed, 29 Nov 2023 08:56:04 -0800
Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Make the minimization text more precise, and merge in the
 UA principle.

---
 index.html | 10 ++--------
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 92ca83c3..043fd928 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -1178,19 +1178,13 @@
 ## Data Minimization {#data-minimization}
 
 <div class="practice" data-audiences="websites user-agents"><span class="practicelab">[=Sites=], [=user agents=], and other [=actors=]
-should minimize the amount of [=personal data=] they transfer.</span></div>
+should restrict the [=personal data=] they transfer to what's necessary to achieve their users'
+goals and interests.</span></div>
 
 <div class="practice" data-audiences="api-designers"><span class="practicelab">Web APIs should be designed to minimize the amount of data that sites need
 to request to carry out their users' goals and provide granularity and user controls over <a>personal
 data</a> that is communicated to sites.</span></div>
 
-<div class="practice" data-audiences="user-agents">
-<span class="practicelab">In maintaining duties of [=duty of
-protection|protection=], [=duty of discretion|discretion=] and [=duty of loyalty|loyalty=], user agents should share data only when it either is needed
-to satisfy a user's immediate goals or aligns with the user's wishes and
-interests.</span>
-</div>
-
 Data minimization limits the risks of data being disclosed or misused. It also
 helps [=user agents=] and other [=actors=] more meaningfully explain the decisions their users need
 to make. For more information, see [[[Data-Minimization]]].

From 48f9210ec031da319786cfd300570063820794c8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jeffrey Yasskin <jyasskin@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 6 Dec 2023 09:29:19 -0800
Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Take Nick's suggestion.

---
 index.html | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 043fd928..c700c79b 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -1178,8 +1178,8 @@
 ## Data Minimization {#data-minimization}
 
 <div class="practice" data-audiences="websites user-agents"><span class="practicelab">[=Sites=], [=user agents=], and other [=actors=]
-should restrict the [=personal data=] they transfer to what's necessary to achieve their users'
-goals and interests.</span></div>
+should restrict the [=personal data=] they transfer to what's either necessary to achieve their users'
+goals or aligns with their users' wishes and interests.</span></div>
 
 <div class="practice" data-audiences="api-designers"><span class="practicelab">Web APIs should be designed to minimize the amount of data that sites need
 to request to carry out their users' goals and provide granularity and user controls over <a>personal

From a3e79eef02a3926158c285bd43ed7c624175783a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jeffrey Yasskin <jyasskin@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 6 Dec 2023 09:31:12 -0800
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Take Pete's suggestion.

---
 index.html | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index c700c79b..7af0cb53 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -1178,7 +1178,7 @@
 ## Data Minimization {#data-minimization}
 
 <div class="practice" data-audiences="websites user-agents"><span class="practicelab">[=Sites=], [=user agents=], and other [=actors=]
-should restrict the [=personal data=] they transfer to what's either necessary to achieve their users'
+should restrict the [=data=] they transfer to what's either necessary to achieve their users'
 goals or aligns with their users' wishes and interests.</span></div>
 
 <div class="practice" data-audiences="api-designers"><span class="practicelab">Web APIs should be designed to minimize the amount of data that sites need