From 1583891a9033fbcc1c16cef20c98b294e8cf6ae1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Robin Berjon <robin.berjon@nytimes.com>
Date: Wed, 8 May 2024 13:01:53 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 1/3] remove tail end of section

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 data-cite="RFC6772#section-13.5">RFC6772</a>].
 </aside>
 
-When considering whether a class of information is likely to be sensitive to
-a person, consider at least these factors:
-
-* whether it serves as a persistent [=identifier=] (see
-  [severity](https://www.w3.org/TR/fingerprinting-guidance/#identifying-fingerprinting-surface-and-evaluating-severity) in
-  [[[fingerprinting-guidance]]]);
-* whether it discloses substantial (including intimate details or inferences)
-  information about the person using the system or other people;
-* whether it can be used to infer particular characteristics that put the person at risk of greater harm;
-* whether it enables other threats, like intrusion.
-
-
 ## Data Rights {#data-rights}
 
 <div class="practice" data-audiences="websites user-agents api-designers">

From 38494ff41d916b874d1255326b5c2a2fa4894e76 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Robin Berjon <robin.berjon@nytimes.com>
Date: Wed, 8 May 2024 13:09:19 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 2/3] rephrase sensitive principle

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 <div class="practice" data-audiences="websites user-agents api-designers">
 <p>
   <span class="practicelab" id="principle-sensitive">
-    System designers
-    should not assume that particular information is or is not sensitive.
-    Whether information is considered sensitive can vary depending on a
-    [=person=]'s circumstances and the [=context=] of an interaction, and it can
-    change over time.
+    There is broad consensus that some categories of information such as credit card numbers
+    or precise geolocation are sensitive but system designers should not assume that other 
+    categories of information are therefore <em>not</em> sensitive. Whether information is 
+    considered sensitive can vary depending on a [=person=]'s circumstances and the [=context=] 
+    of an interaction, and it can change over time.
   </span>
 </p>
 </div>

From 12b9458198ec0266ac2a87a4f9182a808ac85d30 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Robin Berjon <robin@berjon.com>
Date: Wed, 8 May 2024 13:18:27 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Update index.html

Co-authored-by: Jeffrey Yasskin <jyasskin@google.com>
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 <p>
   <span class="practicelab" id="principle-sensitive">
     There is broad consensus that some categories of information such as credit card numbers
-    or precise geolocation are sensitive but system designers should not assume that other 
+    or precise geolocation are sensitive, but system designers should not assume that other 
     categories of information are therefore <em>not</em> sensitive. Whether information is 
     considered sensitive can vary depending on a [=person=]'s circumstances and the [=context=] 
     of an interaction, and it can change over time.