Add changes from Kris and Dawn working session

robander · Mar 24, 2023 · 08a8428 · 08a8428
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diff --git a/specification/langRef/technicalContent/remedy.dita b/specification/langRef/technicalContent/remedy.dita
@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@
   <title><xmlelement>remedy</xmlelement></title>
   <shortdesc>The <xmlelement>remedy</xmlelement> element <ph rev="review-e"
       >contains steps that are a potential solution for <ph rev="review-e"
-        >a</ph> problem. In addition, it also can contain information about
-      the person or team who should perform the task.</ph></shortdesc>
+        >a</ph> problem. In addition, it also might contain information
+      about the person or team who can perform the task.</ph></shortdesc>
   <prolog>
     <metadata>
       <keywords>

diff --git a/specification/langRef/technicalContent/responsibleParty.dita b/specification/langRef/technicalContent/responsibleParty.dita
@@ -5,9 +5,9 @@
   <title><xmlelement>responsibleParty</xmlelement></title>
   <shortdesc>The <xmlelement>responsibleParty</xmlelement> element
     identifies the individual or team whose task it is to perform a remedy
-    procedure. <ph rev="review-e">It also provides important information,
-      such as the  fact that the warranty is voided if the procedure is
-      performed by the wrong person.</ph></shortdesc>
+    procedure. <ph rev="review-e">It also can provide important information
+      about the qualifications that the person or team must
+    have.</ph></shortdesc>
   <prolog>
     <metadata>
       <keywords>
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
   <b>&lt;/responsible-party></b>
   &lt;steps>
     &lt;step>&lt;cmd>Run the following command from the command line: 
-            &lt;codeph>msiexec.exe /I C:\Windows\Installer\XXXXX.msi&lt;/codeph>&lt;/cmd>
+               &lt;codeph>msiexec.exe /I C:\Windows\Installer\XXXXX.msi&lt;/codeph>&lt;/cmd>
     &lt;step>
     &lt;!-- ... -->
   &lt;/steps>

diff --git a/specification/langRef/technicalContent/troubleshooting.dita b/specification/langRef/technicalContent/troubleshooting.dita
@@ -74,7 +74,9 @@
     &lt;troubleSolution>
       &lt;cause>&lt;p><ph rev="review-e">The system memory board might be corrupted.</ph>&lt;/p>&lt;/cause>
       &lt;remedy>
-        <ph rev="review-e">&lt;responsibleParty>Maintenance technician&lt;/responsibleParty></ph>
+        <ph rev="review-e">&lt;responsibleParty>Certified technician. Note that work done by
+           non-qualified individuals will void the product warranty.&lt;/responsibleParty>
+</ph>
         &lt;steps conref="boardReplace.dita#boardReplace.dita/steps">
           &lt;step>&lt;cmd/>&lt;/step>
         &lt;/steps>