Editorial pass, 1. to 1.1.2 (fixes #298) (#334)

* 'incorporating direct feedback from wide review'

* 'sec 1'

* 'sec 1.1'

* 'sec 1.1.1'

* 'sec 1.1.2'

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* 'less affirmative'

* 'align with EWP'

* 'switch web grafs'

* 'move sentence up'

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* 'sense of loss'

* 'out to our from JY'

* 'missing a verb'

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* 'which what'

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